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This week and last week our whole class has been working on a monster pick-a-path .
We had to choose a picture for our setting . Then plan our 5 senses ( which we were going to turn into paragraphs ) Then collaborated on a plan .Then wrote out the 5 paragraphs . Then we introduced the monsters . Then put in the problem and solution . Then put into the SlideShow I'm about to show you .
Well here it is .
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, August 26, 2020
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Really awesome work girls,excellent descriptions in your stories I could imagine what it was like to actually be there. I especially liked it when I could pick where to go in the story. Next time maybe instead of describing I can smell... I can smell.... I can hear.... I can hear you could mix it up a it, for example the smell of bananas or the scent of the flowers or the fresh air filled my nose. You worked really well as a team it was great to read all the different characters view points. You should all be proud of your hard work.
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